What’s Nice about Shanghai? (英文练习)

So, what’s nice about Shanghai? You ask.

Let me tell you this way. It’s spring. It’s the first spring you’ve spent in this Southern city. It’s in downtown and it’s in the French Concession. It’s a spring night. It’s a night after a movie, a movie shown at the Cathay Theatre at Huaihai Zhong Lu and Maoming Nan Lu, a few blocks away from your small apartment on Julu Lu. It’s the air. The air feels so fresh and warm when you walk out the theater and the city looks very different now. The streets are clean and cozy and well lighted and the pedestrians are mostly couples just like you and your wife. And your wife looks beautiful and she tells you how the streets at this moment look exactly like a movie set and you feel the same way and suddenly the night feels so nice.

So you walk home. You walk down Maoming Nan Lu and you make a left turn on Changle Lu. Changle Lu is clean and empty and looks like a movie set at this moment and you see nice little shops that have closed for the night and you see a woman driving a tricycle coming this way. You see the cart of the tricycle is loaded with stuffed animals almost as tall as people and you see bears and monkeys and pandas standing side by side traveling slowly under the street lights. You stop walking and you stand there watching and now the night not only looks like a movie but almost looks like a dream. The women who’s been driving the tricycle sees you two and she stops the tricycle. Right in the middle of Changle Lu, separated by a few cars and taxicabs passing by, that woman waves to you and you smile back and she quickly unloads a lovely bear from her vehicle and she holds that big bear in the air and she waves the bear to you and she almost does some little dance.

In the dream version of this story you and your wife brought home a really big bear but in reality you didn’t. You just stand there watching a big bear dancing in the middle of Changle Lu in a warm spring night and you think: That’s what’s nice about Shanghai.

评论: 7

1.
ann
2008-07-31 00:33
I like the rhythm of the sentence.
I would touch by the feeling you describled.
2.
mimizorro
2008-08-20 10:54
想象一下广岛之恋那两口子在上海一闹市小旅馆里挥汗如雨,一样的节奏,用中式英文互相独白着。fun
3.
听见涛声
2009-12-20 14:25
我的翻译,请主人校对指正。

上海有什么好?
4.
听见涛声
2009-12-20 14:25
“那么,上海有什么好?”你问。
5.
听见涛声
2009-12-20 14:30
让我这样告诉你。春天是好的。你在这座南方城市度过的第一个春天是好的。这座城市的中心区和“法国城”是好的。一个春夜是好的。从电影院出来,看见的夜是好的,淮海中路与茂名南路间中华大剧院的电影,离巨鹿路你家的小公寓几个马路之遥的地方。空气是好的。
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听见涛声
2009-12-20 14:31
从剧院出来,空气新鲜温暖,城市焕然一新。干净,安逸,晶莹的街道上走着一对对情侣,恰似你和你的妻子。她看起来美极了,并且告诉你,此刻的街道完全像是电影场景嘛----而你正也这么觉得----那一刻的夜实在是好的。
7.
Vera
2011-04-01 22:28
为什么普通的街道被描述的这么有爱呢。。好神奇。好像在看童话。很爱。

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